一 、阅读下面材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
1、 Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements.
锲而舍之,朽木不折;锲而不舍,金石可镂。——荀子
Persevering and letting go, the decaying wood remains unbroken; Perseverance, gold and stone can be carved. ——Xunzi
一念放下,万般自在。——王阳明
Let go of the thought and feel completely at ease. ——Wang Yangming
有些人认为坚持会让我们变得更强大,但有时候,放下才是。——赫尔曼·黑塞
Some people believe that persistence makes us stronger, but sometimes, letting go is. ——Hermann Hesse
对此,你怎么看?请写一篇不少于800字的文章,体现你的思考。
What do you think about this? Please write an article of no less than 800 words to reflect your thoughts.
要求:题目自拟,文体不限,不要套作,不得抄袭。
Requirement: The title should be self drafted, with no restrictions on the style, no plagiarism, and no attempt to copy.
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在坚持与放下之间
Between persistence and letting go
“锲而不舍,金石可镂”是荀子对坚持的礼赞;“一念放下,万般自在”是王阳明对放下的通达;而黑塞则道出了二者间更深妙的辩证——“有时候,放下才是”。这看似矛盾的三重智慧,实则共同勾勒出生命在“持”与“放”之间的动态平衡,一种在时代洪流中安顿自我的深层哲学。
Perseverance, stone and stone can be carved "is Xunzi's praise for perseverance; Wang Yangming's understanding of letting go is that 'letting go of one thought leads to a myriad of ease'; And Hesse expressed a deeper dialectical connection between the two - 'Sometimes, letting go is the way'. This seemingly contradictory triple wisdom actually outlines the dynamic balance of life between "holding" and "releasing", a deep philosophy of settling oneself in the tide of the times.
诚然,坚持铸就了人类文明的脊梁。它是穿透时间壁垒的利剑,是化不可能为可能的炼金术。李时珍二十七载风雨,以“坚持”为墨,终成《本草纲目》这部东方医药圣典;曹雪芹“披阅十载,增删五次”,于悼红轩中血泪交融,方有《红楼梦》这部不朽的文学丰碑。他们的坚持,是对抗遗忘与平庸的堡垒,是将个体生命融入永恒星河的壮丽航程。这种坚持,是面对理想时的赤子之心,是“虽千万人吾往矣”的勇毅担当。
Indeed, persistence has forged the backbone of human civilization. It is a sharp sword that penetrates the barriers of time, an alchemy that turns the impossible into the possible. After 27 years of wind and rain, Li Shizhen, with "perseverance" as his ink, finally completed the "Compendium of Materia Medica", a classic of Eastern medicine; Cao Xueqin "reviewed it for ten years, added and deleted it five times" and blended blood and tears in the mourning hall of the Red Chamber Pavilion, creating the immortal literary monument of "Dream of the Red Chamber". Their persistence is a fortress against forgetfulness and mediocrity, a magnificent journey to integrate individual life into the eternal galaxy. This kind of persistence is the childlike heart when facing ideals, and the brave and resolute responsibility of 'although there are millions of people, I will go'.
然而,当坚持异化为偏执的占有,当目标本身已成为灵魂的桎梏,黑塞的箴言便如晨钟暮鼓,警醒我们“放下”的智慧。此时,放下并非失败主义的退却,而是一种战略性的转身,一种对生命格局的主动拓宽。苏轼放下庙堂荣辱的执念,才能在黄州月下完成精神的涅槃,吟唱出“一蓑烟雨任平生”的旷达;梭罗放下世俗成功的标准,隐居瓦尔登湖,才在自然的静谧中寻得生命的本真。他们的放下,卸下的是外在的负累,赢得的却是内在疆域的无垠。
However, when insisting on alienation into paranoid possession, when the goal itself has become a shackle to the soul, Hesse's proverb is like a morning bell and evening drum, reminding us of the wisdom of "letting go". At this moment, letting go is not a retreat from defeatism, but a strategic turn, an active expansion of the life pattern. Only by letting go of the obsession with honor and disgrace in the temple can Su Shi achieve spiritual nirvana under the moon in Huangzhou and sing the broad mindedness of "letting a misty rain last a lifetime"; Thoreau set aside the standards of worldly success and secluded himself in Walden Lake, only then did he find the true essence of life in the tranquility of nature. What they let go of is the external burden, but what they win is the boundless inner territory.
那么,在纷繁的人生棋局中,何时当“持”,何时当“放”?其判准在于对“本心”与“时势”的深刻洞察。坚持,应坚守的是那份不容玷污的初心与核心价值,而非某个僵化的目标或路径。若方向有误,或时移世易,仍固守一隅,便是“靡不有初,鲜克有终”的迷障。放下,则应放下的是那些束缚心灵的执念、不合时宜的欲望与无谓的情感负累,为更有价值的事物腾出空间。这需要一种“时时勤拂拭”的自我观照,一种“识时务者为俊杰”的通达。
So, in the complex game of life, when should we "hold" and when should we "let go"? Its accuracy lies in a profound insight into the "heart" and "situation". Persist, what should be upheld is the original intention and core values that cannot be defiled, rather than a rigid goal or path. If the direction is wrong or the times change, still sticking to a corner is the obstacle of "no beginning, no end". To let go, one should let go of the attachments, inappropriate desires, and meaningless emotional burdens that bind the soul, and make room for more valuable things. This requires a self reflection of "constantly wiping away" and a wisdom of "recognizing the times as heroes".
人生最大的艺术,或许就在于这“持”与“放”间的精准拿捏。我们当在坚持中积蓄力量,在放下中收获轻盈。让坚持成为渡向彼岸的舟筏,而非禁锢心灵的枷锁;让放下成为登高望远的阶梯,而非半途而废的借口。最终,生命的圆满,不在于固守一物,亦不在于放弃所有,而在于拥有一种“持如山之定力,放似云之洒脱”的圆融智慧。
The greatest art in life may lie in the precise balance between 'holding' and 'releasing'. We should accumulate strength through persistence and gain lightness through letting go. Let persistence become a raft to cross to the other shore, rather than a shackle that imprisons the soul; Let letting go become a ladder to climb high and see far, rather than an excuse to give up halfway. In the end, the fulfillment of life does not lie in clinging to one thing, nor in giving up everything, but in possessing a harmonious wisdom of 'holding onto a mountain like determination and letting go like clouds'.
在这持与放的永恒张力中,我们不断定义自我,超越自我,最终在变动不居的世界里,寻得那份动态的、充满生机的平衡,活出生命的广度、深度与从容。
In this eternal tension of holding and releasing, we constantly define ourselves, surpass ourselves, and ultimately find the dynamic and vibrant balance in the ever-changing world, living out the breadth, depth, and composure of life.
【详解】本题考查学生写作的能力。
This question tests students' writing ability.
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这是一道引语类材料作文题。
This is a topic for essay writing based on quotation materials.
材料中呈现了三种不同的观点。荀子强调了坚持的重要性。坚持是一种持之以恒、不轻易放弃的精神,在追求目标的过程中,只有坚持不懈地努力,才能克服重重困难,最终取得成功,就像雕刻金石一样,只要持续地雕琢,再坚硬的石头也能被刻出精美的图案。王阳明的“一念放下,万般自在”则侧重于放下。放下意味着放下心中的执念、欲望、烦恼等,当我们能够放下一些不必要的负担,内心就能获得解脱,达到一种自在、轻松的状态。赫尔曼·黑塞的话进一步指出,坚持和放下并非绝对的对立关系,它们在不同的情境下有着不同的价值,有时候坚持能让我们成长,而有时候放下才是更明智的选择。
There are three different viewpoints presented in the material. Xunzi emphasized the importance of persistence. Perseverance is a spirit of perseverance and not easily giving up. In the process of pursuing goals, only by persistently working hard can we overcome numerous difficulties and ultimately achieve success. Just like carving gold and stone, as long as we continue to carve, even the hardest stone can be carved into exquisite patterns. Wang Yangming's "One thought, let go, all kinds of freedom" focuses on letting go. Letting go means letting go of the attachments, desires, troubles, etc. in our hearts. When we can let go of some unnecessary burdens, our hearts can be liberated and reach a state of ease and relaxation. Hermann Hesse's words further point out that persistence and letting go are not absolute opposites, they have different values in different situations. Sometimes persistence can help us grow, while sometimes letting go is the wiser choice.
文章开篇可以引用材料中的三句话,引出关于坚持与放下这一话题的讨论,点明这是一个值得深入思考的问题。接着,分别阐述坚持和放下的内涵与价值。在论述坚持时,可以列举一些因坚持而取得成功的名人事例,如爱迪生经过无数次的实验坚持发明了电灯,司马迁遭受宫刑后坚持撰写《史记》等,说明坚持对于实现目标、克服困难的重要性。在论述放下时,可以讲述一些放下执念、放下负担后获得内心自在和人生转机的故事,如陶渊明放下官场的名利,回归田园,过上了悠然自得的生活,从而说明放下的意义。然后,深入探讨坚持与放下的辩证关系,指出它们并非相互排斥,而是相辅相成的。在某些情况下,坚持是必要的,而在另一些情况下,放下则是更明智的选择。可以通过具体的事例来分析如何根据实际情况在坚持和放下之间做出正确的抉择。最后,结合时代背景,总结全文,强调在当今社会,我们既要学会坚持,追求自己的梦想和目标,又要懂得放下,不被不必要的执念和负担所困扰,以更加从容、豁达的心态面对生活,实现个人的全面发展。
At the beginning of the article, you can quote three sentences from the material to initiate a discussion on the topic of persistence and letting go, highlighting that this is a question worth pondering deeply. Next, explain the connotations and values of persistence and letting go separately. When discussing persistence, some famous examples of success achieved through persistence can be cited, such as Edison's invention of the electric light after countless experiments, and Sima Qian's insistence on writing "Records of the Grand Historian" after being subjected to palace torture, to illustrate the importance of persistence in achieving goals and overcoming difficulties. When discussing letting go, some stories can be told about how Tao Yuanming achieved inner peace and a turning point in life after letting go of his obsession and burden. For example, Tao Yuanming let go of his fame and fortune in the officialdom, returned to the countryside, and lived a leisurely life, thus illustrating the significance of letting go. Then, we will delve into the dialectical relationship between persistence and letting go, pointing out that they are not mutually exclusive, but complementary. In some cases, persistence is necessary, while in other cases, letting go is a wiser choice. Specific examples can be used to analyze how to make the right choice between persistence and letting go based on the actual situation. Finally, in the context of the times, summarize the entire text and emphasize that in today's society, we must not only learn to persist and pursue our dreams and goals, but also learn to let go and not be troubled by unnecessary attachments and burdens. We should face life with a more calm and open-minded attitude, and achieve comprehensive personal development.
立意:
conception:
1.坚持与放下,皆是人生的智慧之选。
Perseverance and letting go are both wise choices in life.
2.以坚持为帆,以放下为桨,驶向成功彼岸。
2. With perseverance as the sail and letting go as the oar, sail towards the shore of success.
3.在坚持中成长,在放下中升华。
3. Grow through persistence and elevate through letting go.